Hi Bea, I am no artist..
So, I love it, the clouds look a bit repetitive ! not natural....

Otherwise its amazing to me ! 10+

she's nice! love the figure. good job!

Oh wow! A lovely piece here. I'm loving the feathers, they look so soft and cuddly, particularly on her costume. A lot of attention to detail there, I can see, and I can tell this took quite a long time to make. The hair has a nice sheen to it, lots of detail there.

I have a few qualms though. The breasts seem more like balloons, not very natural, though nicely round and shiny. I suggest a study of this particular area of the female anatomy. The space between them seems either too far apart, or just too well defined. Try drawing from photographs of ladies in bikinis or dresses, or a live model would even be better, and you'll see what I mean.

I'm hoping you were going for semi-realism in that respect, otherwise my critiques are questionable, and it would just be a styllistic choice, though I would strongly recommend going for semi-realism .

Also, the right leg's thigh looks too elongated, as if the knee starts at the wrong place. Just general study of human anatomy and how it comes together would help. I like the use of shading and tone work, the left hand looks too bright though. ^^ This is just me nitpicking again, so don't worry. You definately have a feel for the general shape. And yaay for feathers! +6/7

sexy cute!

Great Work!

yay i would like to have her breast sexy lady and very good work

hey nice!
your manga style is good.
but what about using another colouring technic?
it seems like you like using the american style of colouring... what about the japanese one (which look rather like vector graphics).

+10

cool work!

esta buenisimo!! muy buen diseño!

Sooooo Cooool! My best, Bea. Good work! +10/10!

absolutamente genial , de lo mejor que has hecho!

wow! shé sexy

love her tattoo but the clouds do look awkward...yeah i hate backgrounds too

but it's cool!

Hey, the color scheme is great; however the body shows a few little anatomy errors.

AND, BTW girl are you even alive or already (un)dead? I never see you writing anything

I really like the picture.... You asked for critique so here it is:

The "bandages" on her left arm are a bit flat.... Perhaps a little more shade on them... that's it... Lovely piece... keep up!

realy beautiful!

hey azurelle, sorry... but I have so many galleries and work and i can't comment so much... =_=

Oh, I see.
Now it makes me glad that you left me a comment, hun

BTW thanks for adding me to your favs!!

Awesome!

Nice job - delicious colors.

Color and pose are nice. However, there are a lot of things you should fix if you're presenting this for a protfolio...

Flip your image horizontally and look at it. It gives a different point of view and you will see several points like those I list

I know it's easier to see mistakes than fix tehm, I4m still learning how to improve my drawings, but if a fresh look may help you, here comes some comments :
- Her left thigh is too long.
- The line that underline muscle going from her crotch to this left thigh is too high. This gives a weird shape to this zone. Perhaps you should have drawn this line a little below, and accentuated the hip tilt
- The thong suggested under her panty has side strings that seems to join really high on her belly, should not be really comfy ^^
- Lovely job for the fur! I love that
- You should remove those thin black herbs that pop from her braw. They look much more like wrong lines. They disturb this zone of the drawing and it took me some time to figure it was some sort of herb
- Her breast are too balloony... Darlene is right about this
- The neck chain does not need to go between her 2 breasts. It would be nicer by hanging loosely, IT does not look like as influenced by gravity there
- Face and haead are really nice, but perhaps a little too big...

Please do not take those comments as harsh critics. I wish people would have commented my drawings like I did there when I was trying to improve my skills. I hope this helps

You have great basis to create marvelous artwork, that is sure!

great work! good purple lightning on the the figure, very well done expression,
black leather cloths might fit better to the atmoshpere tho

Cool like this one!

like Brian, im no artist, but this looks awesome already good work

Good job. I like the details on the figure and the style. I think the stones could use a little more detailing, but nice work.

MMMMMM sexy!

hehe.. yup sexy.
to me her sexiness seems mostly derived from her facial expression and her pose... adorable!

nice work!

i love the wings and the hair and the little details
its wonderfull
the mood is also aproapriate and the colours are cool

jodo, esta tremendo!!! y vaya par de... ejem! que le has hecho
english translation: very nice ^^

NicE JoB WitH ThE ShAdOwInG! *^_^*